Monday, January 16, 2012

For all book lovers. What do you think of my writing here?

Plot's good. Style's quite nice too. Ofcourse you'll need to edit it, like make the mothers actions and words fit the state of her illness. Like, say "That's fine" instead of "No problem", and "chew slowly" instead of nibble, etc. And also small changes to other parts....overally, I like it. ^_^. Good Luck!!

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